2023, essay, nonfiction, Ohio River Valley Literature, Poet's Life, prose, the no-scape

A Brief Note on (Poetic) Composition

There are as many poetic craft and composition regimens as there are poets. Some have more ritualized processes than others. Some can only write in the morning. Some can only write late into the night. Some carve their time after supper and when the kids are in bed. Some write prolificly. Some are slow and steady crafters. Some write every day. Some only write when they feel properly inspired.

There are no writing practices that are more correct than others. They all work or don’t depending on the particular poet and their particular life.

Nearly all of my poems and 95% of my prose, including this bit, are written in the moment. I revise very little.

Lately I write in brief down times during my work day… raising steam or working the throttle on the Belle of Louisville tends to have a similar effect on my writing.

Sometimes I start out with the intention to focus on a particular style… a sonnet or a tanka or a ghazal or a haiku. Mostly I let the poem lead. Sometimes the poem allows me to lead. The relationship is an organic one.

There are times when the poems drive themselves daily and more often. Sometimes there’s a bit of gunk in the line, and the poems drive slower, or not at all, and not necessarily to my satisfaction. In that case, I revisit themes, the landscapes ajmnd geography of things I’ve written, or I read a new poet or I find an poet I’ve read before and I read them again. Sometimes I read something other than poetry.

So if there is an apparent haste in my poetry or it slows down in number or in quality, I generally don’t dwell. I just vent the burners and fire again.

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2023, nonfiction, Ohio River Valley Literature, the no-scape, Working Class Literature

figure eights and two half-hitches to the future past

Leave the heat at the door. Drenched through and still a bit dehydrated, I unlock the door and carefully trudge into the house. Home. Greeted by the dogs, each one requires a word, a pet. They’ve learned to be quiet when Amanda’s asleep. Sometimes when I don’t work too late, she tries to stay up and see me. Tonight she fell asleep, exhausted after a hard day. She does the Good Work of the World, this present world. I am working my way into the future past. This house is where our timelines join.

She tells me about her day in brief. I have learned how to let it roll over me. Was a time I worked in her world. Was a time and though it was a good time it was also not a good time. The world was in the process of another in a long number of unspoolings. 2020 was an unspooling year. A year of lines coming unwound, like the lines tying the Belle to the wharf.

We are all held by figure eights and two half-hitch knots. We are all floating, an endless fleet. She and I are two boats tied together. When she tells me about her day I think of the madness chasing the walls of the old church, and remember why I am in the future past.

The boat I work on is a memory machine. It’s docked on the edge of four worlds. On days like today, I leave the heat outside the door and sink into the comfort of this now. It will be waiting for me when I go back out tomorrow.

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2022, nonfiction, Ohio River Valley Literature

If crickets only could

the crickets sing ceaselessly
the moon hanging droopy in a north east sky
a train rolls south slowly across
the 14th Street Bridge
at this late … or is it early ? hour
traffic picks up across the 2nd Street Bridge from Indiana
the air is cool, cool like before sunrise
it is too dry for dew here just now
too urban for such non-human tears
the sort of memory crickets might croon about
if they could embody memory

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